There's so much wrong with this picture, technically. But all I wanted to do was make art and play with color, so on that front, it works!
The model I used was a tiny, pixelated picture and I couldn't make out enough detail to refine my drawing. I don't do many portraits either.
I knew I wanted to paint mangoes on her dress and make this very primitive looking but vibrant in color.
I guess I did those things, but still, it could be better.
So here we have my entry for this week.
I hope you're all having anything but a manic Monday!
xo
Lo
acrylic paint, colored pencil on patterned paper. text added by Picasa
Poem found on Poemhunter.com by Ric S. Bastasa
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I think you are being hard on yourself finding "things wrong" with this beautiful painting. It FEELS good to me and looks good too. I like all the mix of papers and paint and pencils.
ReplyDeleteNice warm colors. It's the sentiment of the art (the accompanying words) that tugs at my heart though. There wasn't a day or a moment that I didn't long for Japan, in particular Hokkaido, while I was going to college in the US. The smells in the air, the slant of the sun, natural and artificial sounds--so much of what my senses took in each day reminded me that I was far from home.
ReplyDeleteI like it - it's primitive and sweet, and gives a feeling that I can't describe.
ReplyDeleteI think it works too. Love the colors and the feel of it. Makes me want to go where the tropical sun shines. :)
ReplyDeleteOh, we artists are our own worst critics! I really like this, so full of color and I love how you've included text. Nice take on the topic!
ReplyDeleteThe words and the picture are perfect together. I believe it and it is lovely. I can feel the homesick feeling and I see it in her face , so I think you made a good piece of art, but then again I think I always do.
ReplyDelete♥M
Beautiful warm and rich colors! It reminds me of the feelings I get when I think of St. Vincent & the Grenadines.
ReplyDeleteLove the colors and the feeling:)
ReplyDeleteso glad to hear you say you just wanted to play. that's the best way to open our creative hearts, no?
ReplyDeletelove the colors and the mangos on her dress. i'd like to be there, where it's hot..
This is very beautiful and expressive!
ReplyDeleteYour painting evokes just the right amount of tropical warmth....one can smell the fragrant, warm air....and her eyes show you she remembers another time when she was happy.....another beautiful melding of words and painting....
ReplyDeleteLove,
♥ Robin ♥
I feel her yearning and I love the colors. Funny, as I just saw the exhibit "Gauguin & Polynesia" at SAM Sunday, and here you are with this :)
ReplyDeletei think it's really gorgeous lo, i LOVE it. and yes, gauguin came to mind also.
ReplyDeleteand your ellie painting!! love times ten!
Sometimes ya just gotta let the muse do what she wants. I like it. It does look like primitive island art. Puts me in the mood for the beach.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful! Love the tropical colors, and the mixed media!
ReplyDeleteShe is graceful. You can tell just by the way she holds her hands.
ReplyDeleteAnd she is comfortable with her body; no weight angst. However, her sleek arms cause me envy!
Not to mention island envy. :-)
Very, very lovely.
ReplyDeleteI like the primitive feel of it.
ReplyDeleteWell, I think it's brilliant!!
ReplyDeleteThat's just so typical,,,looking for the 'what's wrong' in the work.
ReplyDeleteGuilty, often!
But I try to remember that (at least for me) the joy is in the process, and it's all good.
It's a beautiful painting, colorful and peaceful all at the same time. So stop it, right now!
:-)
Happy Easter dear♥
ReplyDeleteI hope you don't have to work long hours!
And will have time for your loved ones and art.
Enjoy this weekend!
hugs M
so bright and colorful. It may not be what you had pictured in your mind, but it is still quite good. For those of us who did not have a preconceived idea of how it should look, it's wonderful! I really like your "swamp" pic from last week too. I've enjoyed catching up with your adventures - how awesome that you got to spend time with Marianne in NY!
ReplyDeleteLo, I like what Lynn said, you are being to hard on yourself. Art is about love not perfection.
ReplyDeleteAnd speaking of love, that piece that Suki made for you is wonderful and full of love.
Happy Easter! xoxo
Absolutely perfect
ReplyDeleteKnock knock
ReplyDeleteArtist
Artist who?
Artist you going to post again?
:-)
Oh shoot! I forgot the 'who's there?'!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteSee what happens when I try to be funny. I should stick with eating my cookie dough ice cream
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